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This is a much better shot than inner peace, the crop works well even though it does not conform to the rule of thirds and proves that breaking the rules occasionally does work.

The background of this shot is much better than some of your others too, and the use of strong side lighting and lens flair add to the overall dreaminess and innocent look of the image.

I like your little black lace choker although I'm not so sure about white ribbon, it does not fit the overall look of the image and appears as though it's just something you forgot to take off.

I do like the whit bikini top, although I think an unlined white crochet bikini or crochet crop top would work better as it would allow a little of your skin to show through without showing too much and therefore adding to the innocent look, Also the strings dangling from the front of the bikini to are a little distracting too and take attention away from face and on to your breasts.

Again, if you feel comfortable with the nudity, I'd be tempted to shoot without a top, but to keep the overall innocence cover your breasts with your hair, as it looks long enough. Alternitively, have just one nipple showing, but use the lens flair to semi-obscure it.

Overall quite a good image, with a great model <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="366" title=" (Big Grin)"/>